The alphabet marched over the ruin
Four of the five poems are built on the Hebrew alphabet. Chapters 1, 2, and 4 run twenty-two verses, one letter each, aleph to taw. Chapter 3 tightens the same form to three verses per letter and runs sixty-six. Chapter 5 keeps the count of twenty-two and drops the letters. A reader in English can verify the counts, and the verse totals in this book are exactly that: 22, 22, 66, 22, 22. What the form does is give grief a shape it can be carried through. The poet does not wander; he starts at the first letter, says everything, and stops at the last. The whole of the sorrow gets said, and it gets said in order.
Lamentations 1:1 · Lamentations 3:1 · Lamentations 5:1
The confession that comes before the complaint
Halfway through the first poem the city stops describing what was done to her and says who was right: 'The LORD is righteous, for I have rebelled against His command' (1:18). The same verdict returns in the second poem, 'The LORD has done what He planned; He has accomplished His decree, which He ordained in days of old' (2:17), and in the third as a question that answers itself, 'Why should any mortal man complain, in view of his sins?' (3:39). The horror is never softened and the justice is never argued with. Both stand in the same poem.
Lamentations 1:18 · Lamentations 2:17 · Lamentations 3:39
The hand behind the army
Neither Babylon nor Chaldea appears anywhere in the book. The soldiers are called the adversary, the enemy, the pursuer, and nothing more, and every active verb of the destruction has God as its subject: 'The Lord has rejected His altar; He has abandoned His sanctuary' (2:7), 'The LORD has made Zion forget her appointed feasts and Sabbaths' (2:6), and the hardest line in the book, 'The Lord is like an enemy; He has swallowed up Israel' (2:5). Scripture elsewhere records the Babylonian army in full detail. This book looks past the army to the hand behind it, because a defeat by Babylon would be a political fact, and a judgment by God is something a people can repent of.
Lamentations 2:5 · Lamentations 2:7 · Lamentations 2:17
Mercy at the exact middle
Count the verses straight through and the book has one hundred and fifty-four. The seventy-seventh is Lamentations 3:33, 'For He does not willingly afflict or grieve the sons of men.' The halfway mark of the book falls at the end of that line, and it also closes the first half of chapter 3, whose sixty-six verses divide there. The lines around it are the ones the book is remembered for: 'Because of the loving devotion of the LORD we are not consumed, for His mercies never fail. They are new every morning; great is Your faithfulness!' (3:22-23), then 'The LORD is my portion, says my soul, therefore I will hope in Him' (3:24), then 'For the Lord will not cast us off forever' (3:31). The most tightly ordered poem in the book carries its one sustained turn to hope, and it carries it at the center.
Lamentations 3:22 · Lamentations 3:23 · Lamentations 3:33
None to comfort her
Five times in the first poem the text says the same thing about the city. 'Among all her lovers she hath none to comfort her' (1:2). 'Therefore is she come down wonderfully; she hath no comforter' (1:9). 'Because the comforter that should refresh my soul is far from me' (1:16). 'Zion spreadeth forth her hands; there is none to comfort her' (1:17). 'They have heard that I sigh; there is none to comfort me' (1:21). The second poem asks whether comfort is even possible: 'What shall I compare to thee, that I may comfort thee, O virgin daughter of Zion? For thy breach is great like the sea: who can heal thee?' (2:13). Those six verses are the whole of the comfort language in the book, and every one of them reports its absence. Scripture answers the absence twice. Isaiah opens his book of consolation with 'Comfort ye, comfort ye my people, saith your God' (Isaiah 40:1), and Jesus tells his disciples that the Father 'shall give you another Comforter, that he may be with you for ever' (John 14:16), adding the promise the city never got: 'I will not leave you desolate: I come unto you' (John 14:18). The Spirit given at Pentecost is the comforter this book says was missing, and he is given to be with his people for ever.
Lamentations 1:2 · Lamentations 1:16 · Lamentations 2:13
Prayer aimed at the one who struck
The book never turns away from God to complain about him at a distance. It speaks to him. The third poem says outright that prayer was blocked, 'You have covered Yourself with a cloud that no prayer can pass through' (3:44), and in the same chapter reports that prayer was answered: 'I called on Your name, O LORD, out of the depths of the Pit' (3:55), and then, 'You drew near when I called on You; You said, Do not be afraid' (3:57). The final poem is one long address. It starts with 'Remember, O LORD, what has happened to us' (5:1), works down through everything the nation lost, the elders gone from the city gate and the young men from their music (5:14), until it reaches the line that gathers all of it: 'The crown has fallen from our head. Woe to us, for we have sinned!' (5:16). Then it sets one thing beside the wreck that the wreck did not touch: 'You, O LORD, reign forever; Your throne endures from generation to generation' (5:19). From that throne it asks the question nobody in pain has ever avoided, 'Why have You forgotten us forever? Why have You forsaken us for so long?' (5:20), and makes the one request only God can answer: 'Restore us to Yourself, O LORD, so we may return; renew our days as of old' (5:21).
Lamentations 3:55 · Lamentations 5:16 · Lamentations 5:21