so that my bonds became manifest in Christ throughout the whole prætorian guard, and to all the rest;

As a result, it has become clear throughout the whole palace guard and to everyone else that I am in chains for Christ.

so that my bonds have become manifest in Christ in the whole praetorium, and to the other places--all,

so that my bonds have become manifest [as being] in Christ in all the praetorium and to all others;