The alphabet marched over the ruin
Four of the five poems are built on the Hebrew alphabet. Chapters 1, 2, and 4 run twenty-two verses, one letter each, aleph to taw. Chapter 3 tightens the same form to three verses per letter and runs sixty-six. Chapter 5 keeps the count of twenty-two and drops the letters. A reader in English can verify the counts, and the verse totals in this book are exactly that: 22, 22, 66, 22, 22. What the form does is give grief a shape it can be carried through. The poet does not wander; he starts at the first letter, says everything, and stops at the last. The whole of the sorrow gets said, and it gets said in order.
Lamentations 1:1 · Lamentations 3:1 · Lamentations 5:1
The confession that comes before the complaint
Halfway through the first poem the city stops describing what was done to her and says who was right: 'Jehovah is righteous; for I have rebelled against his commandment' (1:18). The same verdict returns in the second poem, 'Jehovah hath done that which he purposed; he hath fulfilled his word that he commanded in the days of old' (2:17), and in the third as a question that answers itself, 'Wherefore doth a living man complain, a man for the punishment of his sins?' (3:39). The horror is never softened and the justice is never argued with. Both stand in the same poem.
Lamentations 1:18 · Lamentations 2:17 · Lamentations 3:39
The hand behind the army
Neither Babylon nor Chaldea appears anywhere in the book. The soldiers are called the adversary, the enemy, the pursuer, and nothing more, and every active verb of the destruction has God as its subject: 'The Lord hath cast off his altar, he hath abhorred his sanctuary' (2:7), 'Jehovah hath caused solemn assembly and sabbath to be forgotten in Zion' (2:6), and the hardest line in the book, 'The Lord is become as an enemy, he hath swallowed up Israel' (2:5). Scripture elsewhere records the Babylonian army in full detail. This book looks past the army to the hand behind it, because a defeat by Babylon would be a political fact, and a judgment by God is something a people can repent of.
Lamentations 2:5 · Lamentations 2:7 · Lamentations 2:17
Mercy at the exact middle
Count the verses straight through and the book has one hundred and fifty-four. The seventy-seventh is Lamentations 3:33, 'For he doth not afflict willingly, nor grieve the children of men.' The halfway mark of the book falls at the end of that line, and it also closes the first half of chapter 3, whose sixty-six verses divide there. The lines around it are the ones the book is remembered for: 'It is of Jehovah’s lovingkindnesses that we are not consumed, because his compassions fail not. They are new every morning; great is thy faithfulness' (3:22-23), then 'Jehovah is my portion, saith my soul; therefore will I hope in him' (3:24), then 'For the Lord will not cast off for ever' (3:31). The most tightly ordered poem in the book carries its one sustained turn to hope, and it carries it at the center.
Lamentations 3:22 · Lamentations 3:23 · Lamentations 3:33
None to comfort her
Five times in the first poem the text says the same thing about the city. 'Among all her lovers she hath none to comfort her' (1:2). 'Therefore is she come down wonderfully; she hath no comforter' (1:9). 'Because the comforter that should refresh my soul is far from me' (1:16). 'Zion spreadeth forth her hands; there is none to comfort her' (1:17). 'They have heard that I sigh; there is none to comfort me' (1:21). The second poem asks whether comfort is even possible: 'What shall I compare to thee, that I may comfort thee, O virgin daughter of Zion? For thy breach is great like the sea: who can heal thee?' (2:13). Those six verses are the whole of the comfort language in the book, and every one of them reports its absence. Scripture answers the absence twice. Isaiah opens his book of consolation with 'Comfort ye, comfort ye my people, saith your God' (Isaiah 40:1), and Jesus tells his disciples that the Father 'shall give you another Comforter, that he may be with you for ever' (John 14:16), adding the promise the city never got: 'I will not leave you desolate: I come unto you' (John 14:18). The Spirit given at Pentecost is the comforter this book says was missing, and he is given to be with his people for ever.
Lamentations 1:2 · Lamentations 1:16 · Lamentations 2:13
Prayer aimed at the one who struck
The book never turns away from God to complain about him at a distance. It speaks to him. The third poem says outright that prayer was blocked, 'Thou hast covered thyself with a cloud, so that no prayer can pass through' (3:44), and in the same chapter reports that prayer was answered: 'I called upon thy name, O Jehovah, out of the lowest dungeon' (3:55), and then, 'Thou drewest near in the day that I called upon thee; thou saidst, Fear not' (3:57). The final poem is one long address. It starts with 'Remember, O Jehovah, what is come upon us' (5:1), works down through everything the nation lost, the elders gone from the gate and the young men from their music (5:14), until it reaches the line that gathers all of it: 'The crown is fallen from our head: Woe unto us! for we have sinned' (5:16). Then it sets one thing beside the wreck that the wreck did not touch: 'Thou, O Jehovah, abidest for ever; Thy throne is from generation to generation' (5:19). From that throne it asks the question nobody in pain has ever avoided, 'Wherefore dost thou forget us for ever, And forsake us so long time?' (5:20), and makes the one request only God can answer: 'Turn thou us unto thee, O Jehovah, and we shall be turned; Renew our days as of old' (5:21).
Lamentations 3:55 · Lamentations 5:16 · Lamentations 5:21